Are you against or in favour of boarding schools?
Boarding schools are believed, by one school of thought, to be an excellent option for children and they can benefit from attending such schools; however, there are argues against it, citing some concerns. This essay will look at both sides and draw a conclusion.
On the one hand, by attending a boarding school children learn how to be independent as they might be disciplined to become more organized, and it will be beneficent for the remaining of their lives. For instance, they will have to wake up at a certain time in the mornings to have their breakfast and start their regular activities like exercising, which is the normal routine of many such schools. Another merit is that learning to cooperate with others is acquired at these schools since there are many activities doing together such as games and sports, while numerous children who live with their family watch TV or play computer games on end. This kind of cooperation, in real and constant communication with others, is a key-factor to become ready for many jobs and undertake responsibilities in consecutive years. Such an upbringing develops traits that can serve a person as well as a society.
By contrast, opponents of this view point out that a number of concerns about boarding school ranging from emotional disorders, due to staying away from one's family, to sexual abuses which have been reported at boarding schools more often than not. Such issues tend to happen especially in countries with poor supervision. Faced with such issues, children, as they are susceptible to back problems, might suffer for the remaining of their lives.
Overall, it seems clear that the decision to attend boarding schools should be made cautiously, considering different aspects--including the trustworthy of schools’ staff. It would appear that it serves the security and educational quality of a child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nal disorders, due to staying away from ones family, to sexual abuses which have bee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1568627451 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87439804566 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59477124183 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5943357618 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173257185965 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578414206885 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796724134375 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129864348138 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464208546276 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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