Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, it is belleved that, currently there is a trend towords the use of alternative forms of madicine however, at best these methods are ineffective. And at worst they may be dangerous. In this essay i would discuss first the advantage of this problem and second the desedvantage of this view be for coming to roasonabble conclusia.
In the one hand the main benefit of this problem is the ingredients used are natural. Itu is because to reduce the use of chemical drugs that enter the body. For example in Indonesia ancient times herbs and herbs from plants were a medicine, as resulf not the practice of natural medicine practices that offer various methods of treatment , it is no doubl that they natural medicine is very useful to neutralize chemical contained in the body.
On the other hand medical treatment with a faster healing proses, it is because the use of chemical can be adjusted dosage for example use of antibiotic drugs, as resulf the treatment proses is only temporary releaving pain, and gas the effect of addiction so you have to take the drug when sick and the long-term effects of causing damoge to the kidneys, it is no doubl that they the more chemical in our body eat, the harder it is to neutralize.
In conclusia from this case, if is already clear that it gives more menit rather the dimenit i belived that body that has been addicted to chemical drugs it Will be difficult to accept alternative treatments because in alternative medicine it must slightly neutralize the chemicals in the body .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78113207547 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63395221562 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.596684989 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.375 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.125 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280338410876 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151049780469 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146785781988 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173013515339 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165132543288 0.056905535591 290% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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