What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“Hush, good girls do not scream”! This statement like many other ones come out from months of many parents. This runs for boys somehow different. Don’t crack neighbor window’s glass, told to “bad” boys. But, what are cardinal features of good son or daughters? In my opinion, genuine factors is concealed through personality and intellectuality of children on which the next paragraphs will elaborate.
Personally speaking, the most important feature for being accentuated among siblings is politeness. For example, respect has place on the top. When parents see respect, they forget everything. Everything about bothers! Years before, as if never existed. A soft saying can win their trust, their hearts. Had children known how much they can be beneficial by happiness of parents, they would never have said even an “Oh” to them.
Intellectually, lessoning from past is another feature. There is a rule. History should not repeat again. So, mentioned girls and boys listen to stories narrating experiences in past, put so much faith to them, and try to not repeat them. Maybe they accuse to be too much good boys and girls. But, they commit to their rules. What they will see in future has worth to tolerate such accusations.
All in all, I argued that politeness and future-conscious are two features of straightforward boys and girls. I contended that as long as they commit to such principles, the very them also will be beneficial of such lifestyle. For those who experienced such lifestyle, isn’t that what you think, right?
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