Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Although a lot of people believe that spending all life should be in just one place, make family deep-rooted in there, it seems to me that such strategy will not the best shape of life due to deprive families from facing with would-be opportunities and brief their relationships in just a certified box on which the next paragraphs will elaborate.
To begin with, settling in just one place sometimes end by cost of destiny. Whenever families move to another venue, they encounter with much more vast relationships; observe new communities by various facilities; separate themselves from restricted boundaries; and open a new window to maybe golden opportunities. For example, provided that a talented girl or boy in music does not meet community related with musicians and their instruments, he/she will not able to discover herself/himself. Either they stay back from their competitors, or they cannot taste life's sweetness; all of whose turn out to bitterness of regret and remorse.
Moreover, they end up entangling themselves with monotonous life without change. A plenty of experts postulate that a person should not used to be alone. Engulfing in being solitude, segregating from becoming social persons in society, and isolating to just privacy and comfort zone-all gradually lead to not releasing from isolation to such a point that it will turn out to depression at first chronic and then serious.
All in all, to put the issue into a nut shell, maintaining variety in life take of key features into account for a life unless irreversible effects will appear; one of which worst of the other
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