bank letter
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to issue a new debit card. My name is Bob Simmons and I have recently opened a savings account number 75869230530 with your financial institution and the experience of opening the account with your bank was amazing. I am looking forward to this association.
For the banking purposes I was issued a net banking kit which included debit card but it seems to have some technical issue. To elucidate the electronic chip of my debit card has gone faulty and I am not able to withdraw money. I tried to withdrawal attempts at a few banking kiosks but the machine fails to recognize the debit card. I had requested your customer care yesterday to process the request of a new card over the call but they specifically instructed me to write a letter requesting for it as they said that such requests can only be completed if they had a written instruction from my end.
On the contrary, I would like to highlight that I have only one bank account and it is becoming increasingly difficult to manage without cash so I would ask you to process my request and send a new debit card to my postal address.
I look forward to your immediate help on the same.
Yours sincerely
bob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a new debit card to my postal address. I look forward to your immediate help on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56108597285 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65612786845 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58371040724 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9671450668 44.8134815571 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19308517303 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650706331987 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065145273769 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997439735466 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697075859116 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.