misconception on elephant behavior
the reading and the passage both discuss whether or not elephants have a unique behavior. while the reading states that people relation with elephant leads to believe that elephants had a surprising behavior. The lecture refutes this, saying that people are misunderstanding their behavior.
First, the reading climes the elder elephants know their death so they move to near water specific locations like near the water bodies. However, the lecture argues that there is a practical reason to move near the water. she explained that, since the animal gets old, teeth are fallen down; so they search for the soft food: which is obviously available near the water.
In addition, the reading makes the argument that elephants have artistic ability and they can draw pictures like humans. The lecture counter this point by saying there is an issue with reading clime because they get trained to paint the pictures. According to the professor, elephant ears are very sensitive, so the trainer use ear to give the training to draw the pictures.
Lastly, the reading passage argues that elephant gets scared by seeing mice. The lecture refutes this claim by pointing out it is a misinterpretation. she said that it is happened because of lack of familiarity with that small animals. according to her, if the elephant and the mice are in the same zoo, they never get afraid by seeing mice. so, it all because of unfamiliarity
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the reading and the passage both discuss wh...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...he reading and the passage both discuss whether or not elephants have a unique behavior. while...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...r not elephants have a unique behavior. while the reading states that people relation...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r not elephants have a unique behavior. while the reading states that people relation...
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Suggestion: She
...ractical reason to move near the water. she explained that, since the animal gets o...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'drawing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: drawing
...he trainer use ear to give the training to draw the pictures. Lastly, the reading pass...
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Suggestion: She
...pointing out it is a misinterpretation. she said that it is happened because of lac...
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Suggestion: According
...of familiarity with that small animals. according to her, if the elephant and the mice ar...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
..., they never get afraid by seeing mice. so, it all because of unfamiliarity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, lastly, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99578059072 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56460264065 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5525301931 49.2860985944 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 110.228320801 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207188388142 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788258413721 0.0996497079465 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925706846094 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140266085719 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123657956018 0.0443174109184 279% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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