You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I hope this letter finds you well. Recently, I had an opportunity to visit your restaurant, situated in Bahadurabad. I had heard some great reviews and feedback about your restaurant, but I was utterly disappointed with the service and quality of food served.
Let me explain you further. As, it was my parent's wedding anniversary and I had decided to give them a surprise. So, I had planned to visit your restaurant. Sadly, the occasion was ruined due to slow service of staff. Moreover, beef steak wasn't cooked properly. However, we had specifically informed about the level of steak, which was required. We had also lodged a complaint against the quality of food and service of your staff, but it seemed like your staff was least bothered to listen our concerns and cater them.
Therefore, it is requested to initiate an inquiry to resolve the issue. So that in future these issues aren't faced. Moreover, I would like to suggest to initiate training for your staff, so that they are aware of their responsibilities. Hopefully, in future situation will change and standards will improve.
Regards,
Ahmed Ali Arbani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... service of staff. Moreover, beef steak wasnt cooked properly. However, we had specif...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...itiate an inquiry to resolve the issue. So that in future these issues arent faced. Mor...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...e issue. So that in future these issues arent faced. Moreover, I would like to sugges...
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Line 7, column 143, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest initiating'.
Suggestion: suggest initiating
... arent faced. Moreover, I would like to suggest to initiate training for your staff, so that they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02105263158 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77076146818 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652631578947 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7654537841 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164136883081 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542893478886 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651394036366 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120884252819 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886424999554 0.0580467560999 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.