Nowadays children as young as ten years are committing crime terrible crimes such as murder and rape. If children commit such crimes age is no excuse and they should be sent to prisons for rest of their lives. Do you agree?
Recent days are witnessing alarming rise in crime among children. As such, many people opine that government should not be lenient in punishing young delinquents whereas others suggest punishment should be lighter for children. However, hard punishments seem to be no solution to the problem and this essay suggests some alternatives to the situation.
To begin with, the most prominent reason behind juvenile delinquency is immaturity. As, in the young age children fail to differentiate between right and wrong or to calculate implications of any deeds. Kids have tendencies to imitate society and do accordingly, for example, most of the crime cases by children are motivated by T.V. or internet programs they watch. So, at crime by child is society to blame not the child.
Moreover, there are some better ways to curb this problem than wasting life behind bars. One of them is juvenile homes where budding criminals change their attitude after proper training and education. However, wasting life in four walls of jail is loss to country because these young minds contribute a lot in the development of a country; they just need proper direction to flow out their energy.
Furthermore, as old says “like father, like son”. For children to live an auspicious life parents need to believe morality and also teach these values to the children. As it is rightly said that, ‘an apple never falls away from the tree’. Thus, parents are responsible for the child’s behavior and activities.
To recapitulate, it is responsibility of parents to see young ones are provided moral education along with bookish knowledge. If children engage in crime it is society to be punished not the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lighted', 'lit'?
Suggestion: lighted; lit
...eas others suggest punishment should be lighter for children. However, hard punishments...
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...education along with bookish knowledge. If children engage in crime it is society ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24187725632 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84391308313 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642599277978 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7090492678 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256122395333 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773264681633 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07979708187 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13530851948 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711879885529 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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