Write a letter to your local council about the state of the sport club facilities and request more facilities suitable for people of your age.
- Describe your sport club facilities.
- What facilities are required?
- Explain why people of your age need these facilities.
Dear Sir,
I would like to begin by stating that I am a regular member of your Uttara Sports Club which is managed by the local council. I have been a member for the last 5 years and now as I am beginning to become a fitness trainer, I have realized that there are many facilities lacking which are necessary for providing the best services for people of my age group between 25-29 years.
The current sports club is in a dire condition and seriously needs to upgrade many of the equipment. There are two gyms, one swimming pool, one squash court, one tennis court, two football fields and a hockey field. However, since there are more than 5,000 members of the club, at times, it is difficult to book the facilities even on weekends. Furthermore, the swimming pool and grounds are not well maintained and as a result, a lot of the members are opting to cancel their membership.
In order to retain the current members and attract new ones, I propose that a cricket pitch along with a new gymnasium is built. In addition to this, basketball courts and extra equipment in the gym is necessary. If there was a physiotherapy center, then more people can look after their health and train according to their goals.
The people in my age group are mostly young adults who have recently entered the job market. As they are at the beginning of their careers, they often work long hours and hence if the sports center is open until quite late at night, maybe until 11 pm, then the employed people will be able to enjoy these facilities. I hope you take my request into consideration as healthy citizens are likely to contribute more to the society.
With Regards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 298.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60738255034 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44538791924 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.092575088 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232044693686 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627089850809 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651342184449 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117997650113 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751497700793 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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