Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways technology affected the types of relationship people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, technology brings a significant influence in the way of delivering information and communication. People tend to interact with others worldwide through social media. Although there are many advantages in the way of creating relationship, I believe that there are some drawbacks to consider.
People could maintain good communication through internet. The major numbers of people think that communication through internet will be beneficial. For example, a wife who lives separated with her husband can make an intimate communication via skype. The way of meeting by internet connection i...
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace involve with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Sentence: In my opinion, people who spending many times by only sitting in front computer without exercise will damage their own health.
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Sentence Length SD: 4.786 7.5
No. of Words: 259 350
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