In this age of automation, many people complain that humans are becoming subservient to machines. But, in fact, machines are continually improving our lives. What is your opinion?
The issue of whether machines are advantages or disadvantages is a controversial one. On the one hand, humans are becoming more and more dependent on machines. On the other hand, machines are improving are lives exponentially. However, in the final analysis, I believe that the advantages of machines outweigh their disadvantages.
One reason for my belief is that machines have made our lives much easier than before. For example, with the help of a computer, I can navigate on the Internet everyday, searching for the information I need, while my automatic washing machine is doing my laundry and my printer is writing out my thoughts just be me sending voice commands to the computer. My mobile phone enables me to connect with everyone and everybody that I want at the click of a button while at the same time keeping me updated with the latest news and happenings so that I can make decisions to utilize my money in the best possible way.
Another reason for my belief is that machines can do many dangerous work which might be considered extremely risky for humans to do. For instance, a spaceship can take us to outer space where we might have never dared to do. Likewise. a submarine can bring us to the bottom of the ocean, which used to an unexplored area until the last century. In the future, I believe that machines will be able to carry out hazardous tasks as well.
Perhaps the best reason for my belief is that machines have opened more and more possibilities for humans. For instance, a spaceship can take us to outer space where we had never dared to go. Likewise, a submarine can bring us to the bottom of the ocean, which used to be forbidden area to humans. I believe that there will be more machines doing hazardous jobs.
For all these reasons, I therefore believe that machines are so important to humans that we cannot do without them. Of course, machines have also brought with it many disadvantages. Such machines as calculators, cars, typewriters have made some people lazy, stupid, weak, and clumsy. However, whether machines are beneficial to humans depends on how you use them. We can use machines to save us time and then use the time to do more creative work or to enjoy life. Anyway, there are still more advantages than
disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...omputer, I can navigate on the Internet everyday, searching for the information I need, ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
... where we might have never dared to do. Likewise. a submarine can bring us to the bottom...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...might have never dared to do. Likewise. a submarine can bring us to the bottom of...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, likewise, so, still, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75314861461 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68595835331 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468513853904 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4946539809 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104672462822 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423102518377 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363328908751 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713877192138 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453558520158 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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