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Sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana (1999 and 2004) in five countries European.
Coffee 1999 (million of European) 2004 (Million of european)
UK 1,5 20
Switzerland 3 6
Denmark 1,8 2
Beligium 1 1,7
Sweden 0,8 1
Banana 1999 2004
UK 1 5,5
Switzerland 15 47
Denmark 2 0,9
Beligium 0,6 4
Sweden 1,8 1
Two tables shows five different countries of European selling coffee and banana of fairtrade-labelled since 1999 to 2004. Data percentage of millions of euros.
To begin, in 1999 expenditure of product coffee the higher 3 million of euros. Beside that in other state under 2 value. Contrast sales of banana in Switzerland the total 15 euros of million, beside that starting 0.6 to 2. Next in 2004 on coffee brand were increased in-come from all nation. Firstly, there were 3 countries got a slight rise in the revenue amount of 1. Likely in Belgium saw slow fluctuation in the sales of 1,7. Next, Both in Sweden and Denmark countries , sales of coffee rose slightly to 0,2 million of euros. Secondly, demand bought of coffee in Switzerland rose gradually in 100% from 3 to 6 million of euros. The last sales of coffee in UK was significant increase in the sales of coffee amount of 18,5.
In the other hands, During the period 1999 and 2004 emission of banana fairtrade-labelled had fluctuated data comparing coffee. In UK from 1 to 5,5 millions of euros. Then , in Switzerland the customer of banana reached a high from 15 to 47. The expenditure of sales that, become the higher in European. But, twisting in Denmark and Sweden, emission of that product decreased. 2002 saw small jump sales in number of 1,8 to 1 in Sweden, and from 2 to 0,9 in Denmark. But the sales of banana rose gradually in Belgium countries from 0,6 to 4 millions of European.
Over all, sales of fairtade-labelled coffee and banana in European. Generally the higher sales of banana label comparison coffee label. If demand of coffee the bigger in UK countries, and banana in Switzerland. But reduced sales of banana in Sweden countries
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 33.7804878049 231% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 296.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79054054054 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85589199616 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456081081081 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
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Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
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Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
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Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.09268292683 367% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316653553745 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105007992148 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928450302882 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
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Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931821629625 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
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gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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