Many people believe that having a fixes punishment for all crimes is more efficient.
Give advantages and disadvantages of this statement and give your opinion.
Some people believe that there should be a sole punishment for different types of offenece for offenders. Although, the pivotal merit can be taken into account as decrease ratio of crime, I would believe that demerit in form of injustice to innocent people has an upper hand.
On the one hand, if there would be a similar punishment for all types of crimes then, number of crimes would be minimized. That is to say that, criminals would be demoralized because they would be aware about the punishment they are going together which would eventually abide then not to do crime. For example, according to recent survey, crime rate is the lowest in Saudi Arabia because of the same corporal punishment for every crime. Moreover, this scenario would not only decrease the crime rate but, the judgement of every crime would be given rapidly. However, I believe that, despite of having plethora of advantages, disadvantages have an upper hand.
On the other hand, innocent people would be affected die to fix punishment for every crime. This is because, sometimes people do crime in order to save oneself from the egregious situation who in turn should not be punished, albeit, fix punishment would not allow this activity. To illustrate, recently, in Dubai ample of people were hanged to death because they killed criminals ti defend themselves. In addition to that, judiciary system of the particular nation would not be entrusted by people as well as mutiny against government would be risen, if fix punishment should be given to every culprit. Therefore, it is substantiated that, disadvantages of this issue outweigh the advantages.
In conclusion, though, the crime ration would not be augmented due to fix punishment, I believe that, it should not be happened because innocent people would be suffered. So, I believe that, having a fix punishment has myriad of drawbacks and it is recommended that, different punishments for different crimes should be decided by judiciary system.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10429447853 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73385687769 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490797546012 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6715287438 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249420704435 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12144068623 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540586724202 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186612728661 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00926261833342 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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