Which one of the factors do you think is the most important in terms of affecting the lasting time of friendship?
A. friends help each other in a crisis or goes worried in life
B. friend have similar interests or views in the topics
C. friends trust each other completely
Friends, in many ways, determine the life we live in, but people do have different views when talking about what is the key to a long lasting friendship. Among the three factors above, I believe that trust between friends plays much more important role than the other two.
Shearing the similar interests or views in one topic does help us to make friends, but this kind of friend usually do not last for a long time. I like play basketball and when I was in high school, I often play basketball with many of my classmates after class. Although we know each other better and sometimes we may even have lunch together, I can never say that we are been good friends. Because, after attending university, I lost the contact with them. Usually, people might have fun with people who have the same interests with them, but this do not means that they can become friends, not to mention a long lasting friendship.
People who can help each other when they are in need are more likely contribute a solid friendship, but it still not the most important factor. We might come across different kinds of troubles in our daily lives, when we are unable to deal with, we are likely to turn to our neighbors for help. On the contrary, we could also help our neighbors when they are in trouble. This seems like that we have a good friendship with our neighbors. However, when we move to another city or even another country, we tend to form a new friendship with our new neighbors, thus, people who can help each other in a crisis sometimes might not prolong the friendship.
On the contrary, a friend whom we can trust is the key to an enduring friendship. In our lives, we sometimes come across some private issues that we are unwilling to shear with our parents. Instead, we might turn to friends that we can trust. Such kinds of friends understand us better even than our parents do. So, they could provide us with more useful and suitable advice. This kind of friends are so valuable and important that our friendship would not be affected by the time and the distance. My friend, Yang Muxi, and I have been friends for nearly 15 years. Until now, we still connect with each other regularly. We shear everything in our daily lives, and at the same time keep the secrets for each other.
Nothing can be more important than the trust between friends, when it comes to the longevity of a friendship. We can never value the importance of trust more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
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Message: Did you mean 'Nothing'?
Suggestion: Nothing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, thus, kind of, talking about, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 435.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53563218391 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35407237736 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455172413793 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9768478578 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7826086957 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9130434783 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232346501562 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870191378596 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665988539291 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150931122153 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428651065968 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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