Do you agree or disagree: it is easier for parents to raise their children today than 50 years ago.
Parents are the hardest work in the world. Nowadays, some claim that thanks to the development of our society, it is much easier for parents to raise their children, for they enjoy many advantages that advanced society has brought to us. However, I think it is a misunderstanding. Now, raising a child is much harder for parents than before.
Admittedly, advanced medical system have greatly reduce the rate of death of children at very young age, but at the same time, children are exposed to much more dangers than before. 50 years ago, children could breath fresh air and enjoyed fresh and pollution-free food, thus, their are more likely to have a health body. However, our environment has been seriously damaged. Water in the river cannot be drunk and the air are fulled with PM 2.5. As a result, it have become extremely difficult for parents to prevent their children from these diseases.
Besides, raising children is not only enable them to survive, parents should enable their children to be well educated too, which is much more difficult than before. Technology have enabled people live longer, making population increases more and more quickly. However, the limited natural resources have contribute the serious competition in our society. Sending a child to a better school could cost much more money than before. Moreover, after class, parents also sometimes need to spend extra money to invite private coach to teach their children. Only by this way, can their children be able to not fall behind. Thus, parents now are facing much more living pressure.
In addition to more money needed to raise a child, parent also have to pay extra attend to prevent the children from the damages brought by advanced society. Although advanced technology have greatly contributed to our convenient lives, children, lacking self control, are more likely to be negative affected. They might become addicted to the video games or develop serious mental problems due to the information on the Internet. Thus, parents now also have to deal with these potential problems, which might cause damages to their children.
In a word, raising a child have not become easier than before and parents will suffer from pressure from different aspect after having a baby.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...y, advanced medical system have greatly reduce the rate of death of children at very y...
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Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... at the same time, children are exposed to much more dangers than before. 50 years...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...an before. 50 years ago, children could breath fresh air and enjoyed fresh and polluti...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ed fresh and pollution-free food, thus, their are more likely to have a health body. ...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...are fulled with PM 2.5. As a result, it have become extremely difficult for parents ...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
...ver, the limited natural resources have contribute the serious competition in our society....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06434316354 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47524671661 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530831099196 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7699702686 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.45 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272839813022 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853706477864 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699840938116 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171757744285 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600310369537 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.