Some people believe all the wild animals should be protected while others think not all the wild animals should be protected
Earth planet is the house for all animals. Few people argue that all the wild creatures should be provided the protection whiles others believe not all the animals deserve it. In this essay, I am going to discuss both the views and provide my opinion.
Most of the wild animals are predators and they can protect from themselves. Because of their killing instincts they kill humans also and are dangerous to society. For example, there was one incident in which one hikes was killed by bear on the hiking trip. As wild animals like bear, fox have the strength to fight against any situation, they do not need any shelter and can live very well live on their own. We should not be protecting them but we need protection from these canines.
On the other hand, there are many wild animals who are on the verge of extinction such as tigers in India. We need to protect them otherwise our descendants will not be able to see them in person. We should ban the hunting of such wild animal. To add some more they are the part of natural life cycle. For example, in the Yosemite Park when some wild animals were brought them outside; they brought back the natural cycle of the park which was imbalance because of the increasing numbers of deer. We should protect them to maintain the nature’s balance as we all contribute in it.
In conclusion, this essay discussed both the views on protecting wild animals. In my opinion, we should protect all the wild animals to maintain the eco system and to save them from the extinction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6043956044 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34459133072 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0934295516 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463289554192 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153450202132 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153592949182 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316305919565 0.151304729494 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873371687361 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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