You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won, describe the conditions on the day, say how you felt about the match
Dear John,
I hope you are recovering well from the practice match injury. Unfortunately, I was not able to visit you this week but I will make sure to meet you in the next.
As you know our team 'Viper' was having a match with Montan's Kalispell High School team 'Panther' last weekend. I am happy to tell you that we won that game by 3-1.
It was a beautiful sunny weekend in Kalispell. There was a big crowd turnout to cheer for local boys. The soccer game went for full 90 minutes. We dominated the field in the second half. This is primarily because we planned to make 'Panther' tired by making them run in the first half of the game.
We were leveled at the end of the first half. We dominated the second half and also scored two additional goals to win this match. I felt jubilant and was satisfied by the achievement. However, we as a team missed our striker a lot. Hope to see you soon in action sooner.
Warm regards,
Bob
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I hope you are recovering well from the ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... make sure to meet you in the next. As you know our team Viper was having a ma...
^^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...soon in action sooner. Warm regards, Bob
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35057471264 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3022460556 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649425287356 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6157847902 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 50.4666666667 76.5299724578 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181993128667 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559878592846 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696645755783 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134461939923 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970874631551 0.0580467560999 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.77 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.