TPO 29
According to the reading, the author of this passage talks that some dinosaur can survive in Alaska that is very cold today and the reading provides an example of edmontosaur and several arguments to support the migration hypothesis which explain how these dinosaurs can survive in Alaska. However, the professor asserts that these arguments are not convinced and she provides several reasons of her statement.
The first argument in the reading is about the edmontosaur’s diet. Their diet can support the migration hypothesis because they must eat plant which need to grow on warm place so that they must migrate to find some plants to eat. However, the professor asserts that whether the edmontosaur can survive in Alaska is not due to the weather. This is because the weather in summer in Alaska during past time is not as cold as today. In the summer, it even have sunshine during all day so that the edmontosaur can eat enough food in the summer. In addition, in the winter, the edmontosaur can eat the die plants which have plenty of nutrition.
The second argument in the reading is about that many edmontosaur skeletons already be found from the same site. It shows that they lived in herd which can helps animals coordinate their migration. Nevertheless, the professor claims that the demontosaur lived in herd may in order to protect their children. The example is about elk, it is a kind of plant eater and it live in herd but they never migrate.
The last argument in the reading is about that the edmontosaurs had physical capability of migrating long distances. They could run very fast to go to anther place which is warmer. On the contrary, the professor alleges that the high speed running just fit for adults, didn’t fit for young edmontosaurs. In that case, if the edmontosaurs lived in herd, they may not be able to move to another place which is warmer immediately.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 29 73
- At the end of the Triassic period 200 million years ago, there was a mass-extinction event that caused the extinction of more than half of all living species. It was this extinction event that allowed dinosaurs to become the dominant species for the next 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The world is changing quickly. People are less happy than before. 60
- young people tody are better able to make decisions about their own lives 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
According to the reading, the author of ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ides several reasons of her statement. The first argument in the reading is abo...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... the weather in summer in Alaska during past time is not as cold as today. In the summer,...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...s cold as today. In the summer, it even have sunshine during all day so that the edm...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plants which have plenty of nutrition. The second argument in the reading is ab...
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Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...shows that they lived in herd which can helps animals coordinate their migration. Nev...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lives'?
Suggestion: lives
...elk, it is a kind of plant eater and it live in herd but they never migrate. The ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t live in herd but they never migrate. The last argument in the reading is abou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, as to, in addition, kind of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85230769231 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66276361309 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489230769231 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7730788178 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 110.228320801 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340248660884 0.272083759551 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115061409476 0.0996497079465 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055711160724 0.0662205650399 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203210677057 0.162205337803 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022764221314 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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