You are interested in enrolling in a cooking class at a local college and would like a friend to come with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
say where and when the class will be held
give reasons why you think your friend might be interested
suggest a time and place to meet to discuss the idea
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mike,
How have you been?. It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing in reference to tell you that I am interested in enrolling for a cooking class and would like you to join. It will be a full-day course on French cuisine provided by the famous chef Martin De Vere on Thursday at Hotel Sheraton.
As you work as a chef in a restaurant and as you mentioned last time you always wanted to learn to prepare French dishes. For you, this is a great opportunity to meet not only one of your favourite chef but also to get a certificate from one of the prestigious hotels on the successful completion of course. I believe this course will help to improve your skill set as you know in India nowadays most of the restaurants are introducing a plethora of cuisines including French and this may also prove beneficial in the long run as most of the luxury hotels look for chefs with a range of ability to prepare a variety of dishes.
Let us plan to meet at my place this weekend on Saturday around 6 pm. We can have some drinks and discuss this idea and finalize it.
I look forward to seeing you.
Warm wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, How have you been?. It has been a long t...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ook forward to seeing you. Warm wishes Ben
^^^
Line 10, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to seeing you. Warm wishes Ben
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2976744186 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42674836473 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3457073425 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23561856333 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080900194862 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773278963311 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129377115705 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807795094639 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.