Media surrounds us, from the shows we watch on television to the music we listen to on the radio.
How does media affect the society?
Do you agree that the impact of media has more disadvantages than benefits?
In this modern era, media has completely pervaded our life due to the easy accessibility of entertainment means such as radio, television, internet etc. It has both negative and positive influence on society. In my opinion, the disadvantages of media outweigh its advantages.
Firstly, presence of media leads to the spreading of fake news. Many people misuse media as a source of creating rumors. This results in the outspread of wrong and sensationalized news which consequently develops a sense of fear and negativity in society. For example, the false news of any celebrity's demise often goes viral on social media sites like Facebook or Instagram. Moreover, media is responsible for developing anger as well as immorality among people. There are numerous TV shows that contain a lot of violence and bloodshed. Such kind of programs not only create an atrocious picture of society, but also distress people, especially youngsters. Hence one can say that media can have adverse effects on society.
However, it is also agreeable that media is deemed useful in many ways. Nowadays, people get updated with latest news and current affairs due to the easy access to media on mobile phones, laptops, TV etc. Modern people are wary of what's happening in their surroundings and what are the latest ongoing trends in world. For instance, there are various news channels that not only telecast news, but also air programs in different fields such as technology. Therefore, media keeps you more updated and cautious about the recent activities of the world.
To recapitulate, although media has various educational benefits, but its limitations are far more visible than its advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23616236162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83365523546 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.781912551 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4705882353 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216143117876 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071282036595 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514487798048 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133173580068 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00779828863304 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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