All societies have their own music and art. In what way are music and art important for society and for the individual?
Every region has its own kind of music and art, which has a great impact not only on society but also on a person. Arts and music are significant for everyone in many ways that we will now discuss.
Firstly, music and art represent the culture of a particular society. In India, for instance, Garba is a form of dance and music, that represents the culture of Gujarat. One can understand the various aspects of a culture by learning its style of music and arts. Moreover, arts and music help an individual communicate with the people of different regions and to get the good exposure of cultures not only within the country, but also in other countries.
Secondly, arts and music maintain the legacy of the country. For example, in India, there are diverse cultures and every culture is still preserved due to its own ancient folk songs and various historical architectures. So, it can be considered that arts and music also increase the tourism from all over the world. Even for an individual, it is important as a person remains connected to his ancestral roots with the help of folk music and arts.
To sum up, one can say that arts and music are responsible for the longivity of the pristine culture and to conserve the history of the country. Also, music and arts relieve a person from stress and tiredness of day to day life. Therefore, arts not only impact the societies, but it is also an essential part for an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65354330709 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56238426697 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515748031496 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0850409105 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9230769231 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417106443959 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161717099057 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584609507753 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282151624467 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597323145925 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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