Travelling inside the country
Travelling is one of the activities that everybody enjoy the most. By traveling in your own country provide the relaxation that one needs for vacation; but, how can you learn different things if you only travel inside your country? When you travel inside your country you miss the opportunity of learning how different the people are around the world.
Firstly, travelling to another country gives the opportunity to learn about cultures and appreciate differences between people around the world. People from each country have unique customs and traditions. For example, people from Japan are very different to people from Africa or America. In my experience, the first time I travelled, I went to Argentina. I noticed that even Costa Rica and Argentina are in the same continent, the customs and traditions are totally different. One example the food, I ate a lot of meat and vegetables in Argentina instead of rice and beans, my typical food in Costa Rica. Moreover, I learned about many Argentina´s traditions inherited by Europeans, in contrast to many Costa Rican´s traditions inherited by Native Americans. I leaned about other country´s traditions, but I also stretched my own traditions. Hence, I haven´t had all these experiences if I had not travelled outside my country.
In addition to that, travelling to another country brings the perfect excuse to learn a new language. For instance, I´m planning to visit France next year to learn French. By speaking a second language it is possible not only to communicate with the people around France and other Franco-speaker countries, but also it is possible to access to better job opportunities and, therefore, to aspired a better salary. By travelling in my own country I would miss out on the experiences that it brings.
Finally, and one of my favorite things to do when I travel is to go shopping. In my own opinion, go shopping in a foreign country is too much fun because you find many things, such as clothes, that are not common in your country. For instance, I bought a necklace made from a strange rock in Argentina that I really love and I wouldn´have been able to buy it if I hadn´t gone there.
In conclusion, I would like to say that I disagree with the statement "People benefit more from travelling to foreign countries that from travelling in their own country. This is because one would be able to learn about new cultures, learn new languages and buy exclusive item only by travelling abroad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...if you only travel inside your country? When you travel inside your country you miss...
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Line 3, column 706, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun Costa seems to be countable; consider using: 'many '.
Suggestion: many
... inherited by Europeans, in contrast to many Costa Rican's traditions inherited by Na...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... such as clothes, that are not common in your country. For instance, I bought a n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03827751196 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98881104468 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492822966507 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3551868095 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52380952381 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335495869599 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108782557882 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115621215959 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206150889742 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116174600745 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.