Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays many children live their lives really unhealthy. But is that just for fun or they always like that? Everyone thinks children don't know how to live healthily. But is it true?
Most of the children these days like to stay up late, wake up in the middle of the night for dinner, sleep all day, wear weird clothes, say bad things, ..... But not all of them, some kids lives very nice. They can do all the homework without stay up late, still go to school on time and study well. Even then, their parents still worry about them.
Many people say that children live unhealthy lives because of their parents. This true, some parents don't care much about their children so they have terrible<span class="hiddenSpellError" pre="have "></span> lifestyles. On the other hand, some parents care too much about their kids. That makes them feel uncomfortable, so they against their parents. And have many troubles with it. So I think parents aren't responsible for their kids' lifestyle. So, I think parents should notice at their children, but in the right way. For example, don't blame them if they do something wrong. Try to find why they do like that if they wrong we can give them advice if they right we should congratulate them and encourage them to keep doing that.
In my opinion, kids' friends affect them the most. Because kids are still very young and don't know how to choose the right friends so that cause a big problem if they choose the wrong one. But if your kids know how to make friends with good friends they will be like their friends and have a healthy lifestyle. In this situation, we need more time to understand their friends and themselves, not angry with them. Because children are young so they easily be hurt. Teach them how to choose friends and how to be nice with friends, it will make everything better.
School is not responsible for this. I can prove it. School teaches students how to be nice, how to live a healthy way, but do your children do this? I'm not sure they do. We just can give children advice to do like the school teacher. But if you see your children can do it better in the other way, encourage them and help them to solve the problem if necessary.
The most thing affect children these days is Internet and media, they easily get trouble with friends on the internet. The picture they post, the comment they wrote, everything on it could blame them to something they can't image. Parents and friends should be careful and stop your children or friends from the internet too much. Don't care about anything someone put on kids, you have to find the truth and help your children to get out of this problem.
In conclusion, just children who having unhealthy lifestyles are responsible for their lifestyles. They need to control themselves from the internet and try to live a healthy life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, then, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 78.0 24.0651302605 324% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2361.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 503.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69383697813 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65120277116 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419483101392 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 16.0721442886 218% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7517192543 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4571428571 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3714285714 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11428571429 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23865885088 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733295750067 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726210008957 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131733279559 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586444563264 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.96 8.58950901804 69% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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