The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.
Traffic and road accidents are most significant and debatable topic in fast modern life . specially, minor drivers who do not have ample amount of knowledge about traffic rules which causes more accidents.i completely agree with educated young person decrease ratio of accidents.In this essay I will define my point of view with relevant example.
Firstly, without proper skills,persons can not succeed in their field.Young person want to learn driving rapidly by themself only because of any driving school has own time duration and system which is not acceptable by youngsters.for example, driving school has authorised demo car to know key factor of cars which is perfect way to learn a car but it time-consuming. Secondly, along with learning to drive, person must have to know traffic and road safety rules.People should be aware about every sign board.Thirdly, person also, should know speed zone and lane dividing.Finally, self-discipline which is most powerful act to safe driving.DriVers must know their control skill of vehicles.To illustrate, Younger drivers should hide upper limit speed meter with tag it is danger.
On other side, corruption is a major problem to take driving licence that direct impact on more accidents and casualties of people.Addinationaly, people disobey the traffic laws.for inhance, young bikers cross speed limit to show-off stunts in public area which may lead to increase accidents.Further more, people used to break laws because of liberal penalty system.Moreover,high culture society school and college trends attracts the young person to drive vehicle without licensed.
To summarise, to learn a vehicle is not easy job.People should have systematical knowledge and must follow laws and regulations which might be decreases numerous accidents in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55434782609 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21505227699 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644927536232 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.63728183 49.4020404114 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 255.5 106.682146367 239% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.0 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.3333333333 7.06120827912 245% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195032332782 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913941848401 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250588829182 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107636390033 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335625839974 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.7 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.33 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.8 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.