Some people argue that companies and private individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up to the pollution that they produced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Pollution is one of the severe problems of the world. Thus, it is considered by many individuals that industries and public should bear the expenses for cleaning the garbage produced by them in spite of the government. I profoundly agree with this view because this will help to reduce pollution in our environment.
To begin with, individuals must pay for cleaning pollutants because they produce household waste in a huge amount. This is happening because they have adopted use and throw culture completely. In this practice, people buy new products and throw their working products after some time. Another reason is that they use a non-disposable item such as plastic bag a lot. These items cannot be recycled and be used for other purposes, so they end up as a land pollutants. Hence, by charging for waste management will deter them to release unnecessary garbage in the society.
Furthermore, while manufacturing the products, industrial firms release hazardous gases and garbage in a massive amount. These pollutants can be reduced in a significant amount if industries replace their old equipment with the advanced machines. But, they are not willing to replace their old machines as it requires a huge investment. To illustrate, if companies have to pay for the pollutants produced by them then they, certainly, will upgrade their current system to reduce and control the pollution. As a result, pollution will be reduced drastically from our environment.
To conclude, industrial firms and individuals are solely responsible for releasing garbage in an exorbitant amount. Hence, it is apparent to me that they are obliged to bear the expense for cleaning the pollutants released by them.
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Suggestion: pollutant
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, thus, while, such as, as a result, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23357664234 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93986654128 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551094890511 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7237278954 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142204209101 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493129112872 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363289703421 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896013250034 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0184350765927 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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