Youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. Is this a positive or a negative development?
There are a growing number of youngsters who are willing to separate their life from the family. It can be a result of the variety of knowledge that young people are exposed to through social media platforms in fact, it can be beneficial, but it has also its disadvantages.
Everyone was waiting for the day that he or she will has the ability of developing a certain life style belongs to him. This ambition is positive as long as the person will become an added value to the society and becoming productive. One the other hand, young people can miss use this area of freedom and ruin the ir career. According to an article which was published in New York Times, only 10% of teenagers who require to live separately, are starting a career development, While the most of them are hopping only to live without supervision which can be a reason for increasing the number of youth crimes.
The children development is required to be planed and measured in order to achieve the benefits having them as a value added to the society and country economy which can be affected positively.
At the end, our youngsters achievements should be monitored in order to help them to take the step of creating a private life in the correct time for each one of them according to the mentality and knowledge they have been developing through the time they spend with their family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 54, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...waiting for the day that he or she will has the ability of developing a certain lif...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'living'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: living
...imes, only 10% of teenagers who require to live separately, are starting a career devel...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65702479339 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.607225175 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.5408049997 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.875 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.25 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126542757736 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055994841439 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418994207187 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704641511218 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251618807715 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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