Many students have to live with a roommate while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate?
People are different each other so living with roommates is an important thing while going to school or university. person who living together can effect social or university life. You have to be get well with your home friends because peacefull is a quite efficient thing. The reasons are presented below.
One of the primary reason is that about roommate is a cleaning. this is quite so most important thing for me because of that I am an allergic person so I have to live clean and hygienic environment. so hard provision in out side for me but ı have to get that in my room and my home. I love dogs but because of that reason I am not able to getting dogs. so my roommate have to be a clean person actually for common area.
There is also a more different point we must consider. my roommate should know jenga. I love jenga and I need someone for that and my roommate closest person in the short time. Game can be provide intimacy with my roommate so this reason important for me and my roommate. we have to fun together actually we have to get well.
What is more, I would say that a roommate must be a kind and helpful person. I think, I am a helpful person so ı want to help that about something so I want to s/he can help me about home or something. we must understand eachother and we must kind about our life. If I have to study all night ,s/he mustn't listen a loudly music. this is for her/his valid.
Taking into account of all the factors, I am difficult person but not about everthing. I just want to clean,kind and helpful roommate. this qualities for eachother not just me. living a peaceful home is an important thing in this stressfull New York life. I just want to hang out in my room with jenga so this is so silly but ı need to someone who know jenga in mu home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, well, while, i think, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26392961877 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37666956768 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439882697947 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8941735284 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.5833333333 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2083333333 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.45110844103 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206191103154 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652128682132 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811379658055 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134922503789 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810812731018 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 10.9000537634 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.