Is studying in European countries is better than studying in Iran? state your reasons.
The question of whether studying in European countries is better than studying in Iran has always been an important question to me. Personally speaking, I really prefer to study in European country mainly because of three reasons: firstly, there is a good connection between industry and university, secondly, there is freedom in such countries, and thirdly, we can find very good facilities.
As for the first reason, the connection between industry and university has significant effects on job prospects of students. With the lack of this feature in educational system of a country like Iran, all of the discoveries and scientific investigations stay at the level of theory. This situation leads to thousands of unemployed students that have graduated. For example, I spent about two years of my life on my M.A thesis; however hard I tried to my best to communicate with industry, it resulted in almost nothing.
As for the second reason, freedom plays an important role in having peace of mind. Unfortunately, in universities of Iran there is no freedom as far as they determine how to wear clothes for students. It may be laughable to tell that in our university it is forbidden for girls and boys to stand with each other. If an educational system disregards elementary rights of students, is it possible to study there?
As for third reason, the facilities of a university are very effective on the results of investigations. If there is an update laboratory facility, most of the results will be exact and we can compare our results with other researchers all over the world. This comparison gives us the opportunity to be seen by most of well-known professors.
To conclude, with these reason in mind, I predict that students can enjoy their academic life in European country and I also predict that most of Iranian students will migrate to European country in the near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether studying in European countries is bette...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...cational system of a country like Iran, all of the discoveries and scientific investigatio...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...pent about two years of my life on my M.A thesis; however hard I tried to my best...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as for, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99050632911 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93735500039 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2319619366 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.642857143 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21561137357 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067094568797 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114923730245 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120798017789 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139831789873 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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