Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Heated debate has been going on about how to use open spaces in cities or towns. While some people argue that it is more important to grow trees than building houses, others disagree. In my opinion, both of them make great contributions to a greater city in unique ways, thus they are important in equal measure.
On one hand, there is no doubt that growing trees in cities have many benefits. Primarily, trees naturally purify air, which reduces air pollution resulted from multiple factors including factories and cars. In addition, by providing residents with a relaxing and peaceful environment, trees not only promote a more livable city, they also have an positive impact on reducing an individual's stress level, as many studies suggested.
On the other hand, the importance of building houses should not be neglected. In order to accommodate the population growth of a city, it is recommended to build enough houses or apartments so that city residents have a shelter to stay. Without a place to live, some people may become law offenders such as drug dealers or thieves, which will be detrimental to the safety of the community. Moreover, an extensive house or building construction will open up more jobs such as architects and a property agents, which will improve the employment rate and ultimately help with economic growth.
In conclusion, planting trees and building houses are equally important to meet city residents' needs. I believe that a good balance between them will make a city more attractive.
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- Some people consider thinking about and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue that people should simply live in the moment. Do you agree or disagree? Use at least one personal example in your response. 61
- Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses To what extent do you agree or disagree 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98353909465 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68584653571 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5588605341 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.916666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274442694006 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100001827127 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838117578716 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170237622255 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819716013748 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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