environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries. In other word, it is an international problem. To extent what you agree or disagree?
In recent years, environmental issues have been exploding too huge for individuals or a nation to control and become an international phenomenon. From my perspective, these problems should be managed by cooperated countries instead of being left to one.
To begin with, we live and exist in the exact same house which is the Earth even though each individual stays in vastly different continents, parts perhaps. Whether this home is decorated with bright lights or trashes hugely depends on humans who are supposed to be head of the world. When we face quandaries related to environment, if they are left to individual countries then other nations will not consider these issues involving them and ignorance will surely appear. Although many efforts are made, the habitat and biodiversity are still imperiled as they are not solved collectively.
Moreover, international level has more influences than keeping within national borders. Laws reprimanding and punishing polluters should be introduced worldwide and global awareness ought to be raised so that we could register an amazing impact on the environment, which cannot be feasible on individual level. we have already had global warming and climate change, which is unable to be stopped but possible to be enhanced as long as the whole world join together. Once small action multiplied by millions, we would see a better world where all species could live in happiness and breathe the fresh air together.
To sum up, environmental problems cannot be seen as individual nations' ones and must be considered globally. Natural resources will be protected only if everyone involves themselves into environmentally preserved processes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, still, then, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38867924528 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93602366459 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690566037736 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2264291183 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243993149612 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848373800996 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719745435656 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164317265571 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670350930563 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.