Many cities around the world have seen an explosion in the number of supermarkets appearing on the high street and out of the town shopping centres. This development has led to increased choice for customers; ensured prices are kept low and make the shopping experience a lot easier
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons to your answer and include and relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.
Shopping is an important need for families. We are experiencing a new era of hyper markets, which are facilitating the process of purchasing domestic goods. Although most of this big scale department store are located in the out skirts of cities, many people are enjoying the trip to reach it. The following lines will discuss weather this change of market nature is positive or not.
This mean time have made the needs of houses are many which make the action of acquring them takes a lot of time. In my point of view, this kind of development is beneficial for many reasons such as saving time and money. It is noted that, these remote department stores have become the correct place to go in order to save your expenses despite the fact of its farness. They contain myriad kinds of good, which will help you saving efforts, by making one journey for whatever you request. For example, a research paper which was published in Al-Ahram Weekly in, 2005 which have told that, 50 % of families have become convinced, that their expenses have become decrease ,since they started to use these facilities together with increase the fun during shopping.
In other point of view, The development in supermarkets are increasing the money that family is spending , because they contain facilities that force people to spend their money such as children fun areas and coffee shops.
In conclusion, remote areas supermarkets have become an important need for the busy meantime in spite of its disadvantages. I believe that, these stores will have to perform more development to keep in line with the rapid change in life needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 426, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...riad kinds of good, which will help you saving efforts, by making one journey for what...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...that their expenses have become decrease ,since they started to use these faciliti...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of view, The development in supermarkets are increasing the money that family is...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ermarkets are increasing the money that family is spending , because they conta...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...asing the money that family is spending , because they contain facilities that f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that family is spending , because they contain facilities that force people to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as children fun areas and coffee shops. In conclusion, remote areas supermarkets...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89090909091 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51470929805 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7972389767 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169958633332 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656450912792 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384776002524 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980131800645 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261662217241 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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