In this modernization era with increasing of population in the world, supermarkets and malls are also expansion day by day. To many, this development is optimistic in various facets. I also believe in above notion to a considerable extent and reasons for the same are elaborated further.
To initiate with, nowadays every countries have a lot of mega malls and supermarkets on the high street and in out of town shopping centers. In malls people get everything very easily and obtain everything in one place. For example, one person want to by shoes and cloth but he doesn't have lot of time he can buy easily both in one place. Person can spent some time with family after shopping. Some like to buy branded products they can get easily everything in malls and also have some superb discount on the product.
On spite of, in the present climate everyone like to buy from the supermarket because of that small merchant are became unemployed and rate of unemployment is increased. Any how they have to close their shop because they don't have enough profit. In the mall, there are no place for small vendors.
To sum up, from what all has been discovered above it is certain that malls and supermarkets have some pessimistic aspects but can be overlooked against the pragmatic aspects of it which provides people with flexibility in their shopping at lower cost.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
... supermarkets on the high street and in out of town shopping centers. In malls people get e...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...erson want to by shoes and cloth but he doesnt have lot of time he can buy easily both...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...rket because of that small merchant are became unemployed and rate of unemployment is ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y have to close their shop because they dont have enough profit. In the mall, there ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64900367341 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2621907114 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143298290759 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549631003772 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521912343728 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836700252348 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257277424128 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-town'?
Suggestion: out-of-town
... supermarkets on the high street and in out of town shopping centers. In malls people get e...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...erson want to by shoes and cloth but he doesnt have lot of time he can buy easily both...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...rket because of that small merchant are became unemployed and rate of unemployment is ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y have to close their shop because they dont have enough profit. In the mall, there ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64900367341 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2621907114 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143298290759 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549631003772 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521912343728 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836700252348 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257277424128 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.