The bar chart shows the production and consumption of electricity in 2004 in top ten different countries. X axis shows the ten different countries. Y axis shows the production and consumption of electricity in 2004. Chine and US have highest consumption and production of electricity while Germany and Korea have lowest.
According to the chart, production of electricity in 2014, China have 1st rank that is 5398 billion kwh, the 2nd rank have United States is 4099 billion kwh, the 3rd rank is Russia that have 1057 billion kwh, the 4th rank is Japan that have 936.2 billion kwh, the 5th rank is India that have 871 billion kwh, the 6th rank is Canada that have 618.9 billion kwh, the 7th rank is France that have 561.2 billion kwh, the 8th rank is Brazil that have 530.7 billion kwh, the 9th rank is Germany that have 526.6 billion kwh and 10th rank is Republic Korea that have 485.1 billion kwh.
Moving further, it is observe that the consumption of electricity in China have 5322 billion kwh which have 1st rank, the 2nd rank have United States is 3866 billion kwh, the 3rd rank is Russia that have 1038 billion kwh, the 4th rank is Japan that have 856.7 billion kwh, the 5th rank is India that have 698.8 billion kwh, the 6th rank is Canada that have 499.9 billion kwh, the 7th rank is France that have 462.9 billion kwh, the 8th rank is Brazil that have 455.8 billion kwh, the 9th rank is Germany that have 582.5 billion kwh and 10th rank is Republic Korea that have 449.5 billion kwh.
Overall, it is apparent that China and United States have highest while republic Korea have least production and consumption of electricity. Only one country have high consumption then the production that is Germany.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'observed'.
Suggestion: observed
...1 billion kwh. Moving further, it is observe that the consumption of electricity in ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the highest'.
Suggestion: have the highest
...s apparent that China and United States have highest while republic Korea have least product...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the least'.
Suggestion: have the least
...tates have highest while republic Korea have least production and consumption of electrici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 3.15609756098 665% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66118421053 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24890083571 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.309210526316 0.547539520022 56% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 364.5 283.868780488 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 17.0 4.33902439024 392% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.493035396 43.030603864 503% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.125 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.0 22.9334400587 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0686358199463 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114773747014 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946121938587 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995004987377 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992916896656 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.75 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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