The table shows that five European countries people spend income on their different expenditure like foods and drinks, housing, clothing and entertainment. They spend high proportion of income on foods and drinks.
Overall, Turkey and Spain spend 36% and 31% on foods and drinks while they paid only 8% to 15% on clothing and entertainment. 37% od expenses used in housing by UK which is higher than all countries and expenses. UK pay 11% of income in clothing and entertainment. France spend lowest portion in clothing that is 7% it is a very small proportion of income in all countries and in all expenses. Germany used 33% on housing and 15% to 19% in clothing and entertainment.
In conclusion, the table indicates that people like to spend their income on foods and drinks for cheerup with friends and for taste. They pay very low portion of income on clothing and entertainment while they need cloth they but it and get some refreshments they used to get entertainment.
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 70
- The chart below gives information about billions of euros invested in four areas by various organisations 67
- The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink housing clothing and entertainment 61
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects Other people think that in today s world subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History Discuss both view and give opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spend the lowest'.
Suggestion: spend the lowest
...e in clothing and entertainment. France spend lowest portion in clothing that is 7% it is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89221556886 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86764460214 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479041916168 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6976248992 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387329047306 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169637570526 0.103423049105 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07898485859 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280059288449 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821639918485 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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