The bar chart indicates the information about investment in Euros in four different business by different organisations. In the chart, x- axis shows the euros in billions and y- axis shows the different business in different organisations. They like to invest high amount of euros ny A and B organization while by D and E organization they save low portion of euros.
According to the chart, in business of construction they save the money by A and B that is 1.4 and 1.6 while C,D and E invest same amount that is 1 billion euros. B organization highly invest in staff training and research than the other organisations that is 1.9 and 1.6 billion euros. C saves the same euros in machinery and staff training which is 1.3 opposite E saves only 0.8 billions euros in machinery and D saves 0.7 in staff training that is lower value than the other organisations.
In conclusion, it shows that mostly public like to invest by A and B organization while by D and E organization saves low portion of euros. Nowadays people aware of the benefits of the investment so it is increase day by day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , D
...y by A and B that is 1.4 and 1.6 while C,D and E invest same amount that is 1 bill...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65979381443 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98849958497 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.417525773196 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3232276348 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240428983821 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118763020191 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799378878447 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155527159658 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755091854916 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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