The chart below gives information about billions of euros invested in four areas by various organisations

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The chart below gives information about billions of euros invested in four areas by various organisations.

The bar graph illustrates the investment on 4 business sectors in five different organizations in Billions of euros.

In general Organization A, B and C shows the highest investment while organization D and E shows the lowest.

On the contrary, Organization B shows the highest investment which is more than 1.8 Billion on Staff training and 1.6 Billion on Research while Organization A saves about 1.5 billion on Building which is higher than the Organisation B. in addition Organisation A investing 1.2 Billion on staff training that makes it the second highest, comparing to other organizations. Organisation C saves 1.3 billion euros on machinery and reaserch, although it invest less on Building and staff training. Organisation C, D and E invested similar amount on Building which is 1 Billion euros and organization B and D invested less than that amount on machinery and also similar to each other. In the contrast Organisation D and E are the least invested on all 4 sectors.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A safe', 'A save' or simply 'saves'?
Suggestion: A safe; A save; Saves
... Billion on Research while Organization A saves about 1.5 billion on Building which is ...
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Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ganisation B. in addition Organisation A investing 1.2 Billion on staff training ...
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Line 5, column 451, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'invests'?
Suggestion: invests
... on machinery and reaserch, although it invest less on Building and staff training. Or...
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Line 5, column 759, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re the least invested on all 4 sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, while, in addition, in general, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24353687299 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490797546012 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2859213246 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.571428571 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252902433732 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139367204711 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508470210474 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13587456394 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967014375522 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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