The two illustrate shows the university's sports centre at present and development of University in future. Overall, a growth in the size of future plans and increase in facilities.
Currently, person enter in the university from the south side and in the entrance there is the reception. 25 meter pool is situated in the centre. Pool ia surrounded by seating area, gym and changing room which are located East, North and West of university sports centre, respectively. East and West side of university there are two Outdoors courts are located.
Future plans of university is the area of changing room, seating, reception, 25 meter pool, gym are located as it is but area of gym is increased. They construct sports hall besides the seating area, near the sports hall they build two dance studio. Opposite side of sports hall there is changing room and cafe. So public come out of the sports hall then seat in the cafe house or change cloth in changing room. West side of university sports centre they plan to construct leisure pool. Person come out from the leisure pool they entered in the changing room. Sports shop is located at same wall of changing room.
To sum up, there are lots of difference between before the plans of changing and after it. After construction of university there are more facilities for sports students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t present and development of University in future. Overall, a growth in the size of futur...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hall besides the seating area, near the sports hall they build two dance studio. Oppos...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
...ar the sports hall they build two dance studio. Opposite side of sports hall there is ...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...oom and cafe. So public come out of the sports hall then seat in the cafe house or cha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, then, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86403508772 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52733212378 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482456140351 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3802748401 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9333333333 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199639484375 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828293471456 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703005581491 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155873266464 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585482942757 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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