It is trúe that, nowadays, children mostly like to spend their time in watching TV rather than doing creative things and outdoor activities. There are lots of causes and benefits also but here I like to talk about causes of watching TV more and what is solution of these problems in upcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with, these days parents are busy in the business and their social life so they don't have tine to spend with children. Children feel boring that's why they like to watch cartoons and online educational programs. Secondly, children don't aware about the outdoor games or creativity and arts that's why they interested in watching television and mobile or play online games but today games are very dangerous for their minds. As well as, at this time, with the help of the online games and activities some people doing fraud. Finally, children can't go alone on roads because of traffic and crowded roads with vehicles, adults, so the only way that children could have fun is watching movie or cartoons on television.
Hence, there are several ways to solve the problems parents have to spend time with the children everyday, talk with them and doing some creativity. Otherway is that they get the membership of children clubs at there they can play some games and give the knowledge about art and crafts or some educational knowledge. In addition, parents go with the children in park or some crowded area and aware them about how to walk in park and if they have some other problem how handle it and go to the watchman of park and talk with him.
Thus, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that parents spend time with there children it is very useful for them and make them knowledgeable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3526911305 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493333333333 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.6912204522 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.272727273 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311318158732 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127818026869 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643929850507 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204106630583 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710475015079 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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