Topic: Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
There is a controversial topic of today’s world that whether a country could have both successful financial statement and clean environment at the same time or not. While I agree that many countries might not gain a balance between economic development and environmental protection, I am convinced that countries could have both economic success and uncontaminated environment.
Many people hold a belief that it is impossible for the government to protect the environment while developing the economy. The primary reason is that countries which have a developed financial statement, often make a significant contribution to global warming and air pollution. These countries usually release an excessive amount of trapping gas including carbon dioxide and methane as a result of the growth of some industries. In order to operate a large number of machines, workers need to burn oil or other materials and this process could discharge a significant amount of emission. In China, for example, while China is gradually becoming one of the richest countries in the world, Chinese are suffering from extreme weather and the air contamination caused by thousands gallons of industrial fumes released daily.
However, I believe that a successful economy and a clean environment could be achieved by a country at the same time. First, when having money, governments could take lots of actions to improve the environment. For instance, authorities could allocate the national budget for inventing environmentally-friendly subjects such as bio-degradable plastic bags or vehicles running on electricity. Second, it would be easier for governments to tackle environment-related issues when they have money. In Singapore for example, in order to against global warming, there is a system which costs billion dollars, was developed to transform carbon dioxide into oxygen.
To conclude, some people believe that it would be impossible for governments to achieve a balance between economic development and environmental protection. However, I am of the opinion that against the aforementioned belief because a good financial statement could assist authorities a lot in the process of keeping the environment clean, and as a result, both economic success and a clean habitat could be achieved by some countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...of some industries. In order to operate a large number of machines, workers need to burn oil or o...
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Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... warming, there is a system which costs billion dollars, was developed to transform car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54957507082 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32394706579 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535410764873 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0035400637 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.928571429 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255140439856 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890034680668 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650893068301 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175158122765 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802718250986 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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