Topic: Some would say that it is possible for a country to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some would argue that a country cannot develop its economy without damaging the environment, while others say that it is possible to grow both. While many states choose to boost their economy by ignoring environmental protection standards to gain more competitive advantages, I believe that focusing on eco-friendly industries would be a better approach to increase GDP and maintain a clean environment.
On the one hand, many developing countries have the ambition to develop quickly at any price by using their advantages of cheap labor, large natural resources and low requirements of environmental protection to attract more investors. This results in a booming of economy and polluting environment. In many developing countries such as China and Vietnam, in order to achieve two digits growth rate annually, governments have neglected so many serious effects on environments that come from many factories with the low standard of environmental protection. As a result, these countries are facing heavy environmental pollution, and they have spent billions of dollars to tackle this problem.
On the other hand, it is possible to grow GDP and preserve the environment at the same time. If a government concentrates to develop high – tech industries and tourism, the GDP of that country will increase, and the environment will be protected. This is because the non-smoke industries such as IT and tourism, which do not consume much energy and natural resources, can create billions of dollars if they produce high-quality products and services. In the United State, tech companies such as Apple and Google have annual revenues are even higher than the total GDP of Brazil, where the main industry is mining. Therefore, I believe that investing in clean industries should be a sustainable solution to make the country prosperous and clean.
In conclusion, although lower environmental protection regulations can bring greater competition for some countries to grow economy quickly, it would cause many serious consequences in the environment, that is why a sustainable approach to develop environment-friendly manufacturing is a better solution for every country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns of dollars to tackle this problem. On the other hand, it is possible to gro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50595238095 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18521771479 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0233505272 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.166666667 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224182615429 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871656869759 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722377957571 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143819662845 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06020614325 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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