Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
One of the most debated issues in today's society is the amount of money allocated to people working in the athletic sector rather than those working in serious and critical professions. Although it may seem that the situation is accepted by some individuals, it is actually seen as an inequitable state in the community. This essay will shed light on both views.
On the one hand, it has always been the distinctive talented and gifted persons who will have the lion's share of any given amount of money, probably because it is a matter of demand and supply. Consequently when the football player is the demand, putting in mind that the truly skilful players would not exceed the fingers of one's hand in the country, so the competition among clubs would be so hard. In this case, any party that pays more will have the player. The same for trainers who have a glorious record for the teams they orchestrated.
On the other hand, the opponents, of the previous type of thinking and managing financial matters in the way it had been in the aforementioned state, believe that individuals who hold the post of significant positions should earn the same amount of wages given to sports professionals, l if not more. To exemplify the doctors save millions of lives every single day, teachers and university lecturers responsible for the education and well-being of our nation in terms of education and culture so it is quietly reasonable to be given the upper hand in salaries.
To conclude, I must opine that the government should pay both types of professionals in the same quantity. But if the sports players and coaches are paid from private sectors so this will not affect other professions. In this case, the government has nothing to do with these private sectors except imposing appropriate taxes to enhance community needed careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, if, may, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89776357827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71031612024 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58785942492 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0190034721 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163814114595 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555806181902 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372968881446 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918465282408 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029066355907 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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