Successful sportsmen can earn a great deal more than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
In recent times, sportspersons are getting more and more attention just because of the media. The media is playing a vital role to promote players, and other professionals are neglecting. A few people consider that sports individual work hard, and in return receive handsome amounts. Other opposed. According to them, it is sheer efficacious to other deserving specialists. I will discuss both the viewpoints and add an opinion.
To embark with, it is a fact that sports personalities are receiving respect and as well as making lots of money. Indeed, these people deserve all the benefits and perks because they serve for the nation, and perform for the pristine of the country which is not only in own states but, across the global. For one example, Portugal, where football is a national sport, and footballers earn considerable sums owing to, this sport has spectacular fan-following, and spectators are crazy about it. Thus, these services provide well-to-do living standards and stunning respectable individual.
On the other hand, other professions which needs much hard work and struggle receiving less stardom and affluence. Undoubtedly, some occupations require massive studies and practices, but after spending huge time in their field, they get less return against all the sacrifices which they did in during the pupil’s era. For instance, doctors who extremely work hard and vigorously involve in their learnings, but unfortunately, once they completed and reach the desired destination they do not treat as iconic, and also collect lesser remuneration which is completely discriminated behaviour.
To conclude, sportsmen consider as the star, and due to this, they demand exceptional salaries and receive extraordinary fame in contrast to other professions such as doctors. In the best of my opinion, both are heroes and deserve the same level of admiration and other packages.
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...ndards and stunning respectable person. On the other hand, other professions whi...
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...which needs much hard work and struggle receiving less stardom and affluence. Undoubtedly...
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... is completely discriminated behaviour. To conclude, sportsmen consider as the s...
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...evel of admiration and other packages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88965793881 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4764698311 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.142857143 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165265162841 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615117597286 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414621610484 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104638146133 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554282486289 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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