Q# Men and women are capable of doing all jobs equally well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over a long span of the period, it has been discussing male and female both have the same capacity to perform all the duties at a similar level. I completely decline this statement because ladies have a few limitations to do all the works.
To begin with, the foremost reason is the culture of different tribes. In reality, the majority of countries are bond with several customs and traditions which hamper to women to fulfil the responsibilities like a man. In light of this fact, the plethora of females who have the talent to contribute to the family is compiled to do the same. For example, the gulf region where women are banned to drive vehicles but, they can drive and get the opportunity of employment. Unfortunately, the cruel system of that area restricts to women to accomplish the activities.
Furthermore, another cause which is an obstacle for women to carry out doings that is illiteracy. It is a dilemma of the modern era that females treat like animals, and due to this, she is unable to receive education as developed nations women have. Undoubtedly such verdicts impose to them which lead to discouraging to meet the jobs identically as men do. For instance, it is very obvious in the villages where women are not allowed to go to school and other institutes for the sake of religious education. So, it is sheer efficacious with females to keep away to walk parallel with a man.
To conclude, in recent time, men and women both are efficient enough to perform all the things at the same level. However, some reasons are exist which push back to such as tribal norms and ignorance are heading a major role in accomplishing the duties. In best of my opinion, women are passionate and very enthusiastic for work as same as men. Indeed, they are just waiting for the opportunity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 141, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...e same level. However, some reasons are exist which push back to such as tribal norms...
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Line 9, column 397, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y are just waiting for the opportunity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71044776119 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69854708728 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570149253731 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.190326045 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6111111111 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0499710116777 0.244688304435 20% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0158157932559 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218919404465 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294182095123 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026579308961 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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