The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Science has developed with rate same as the speed of light and increases luxuries and conveniences in humans’ life. Today we have different means of transportation and communication which decreases distance between us. And because of the luxuries and conveniences of recent life style prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent people. The people focus more on their comfort than hard work. We can see many examples which reflect that the comfort of the life deteriorate the strong and independence of an individual.
First of all, in olden days people did not have comfort of equipment and mostly they work with hands. Today the people are dependent on the equipment for daily routine such as electricity is most important for us, and even if we assume that in morning we wake up and the electricity cutoff then we become unable to complete household works. But in olden days people manage their work without electricity. Let’s take another example that now people have to join gyms and clubs for physical activities which was a part of our daily life in olden days. Due to lack of physical activities different types of diseases have noticed by doctors and scientist and Obesity is one of them.
Additionally, the strength of mental power is also impairing because of convenience in daily routine. One of the biggest inventions of the science is internet which makes our life easy and fast but people use internet for every small work which make them depended. Without internet connection mobile is dead for people. Because of use internet people do not tries to memorize even small thing and every time they accesses internet to find answers. Due to such mental dependencies Dementia is becoming common mental disease now a day. Even we can see people take calculators for simple calculations but when calculator did not find easily the people did calculations orally. Now we all have calculator in our mobile and we can use it easily. So the luxuries and conveniences make people weak physically as well as mentally.
Furthermore, a child’s day starts with television, mobile or with other electronic device. They wake up and seat on a chair and start watching their favorite show which makes them lazy as well as weak. I remember when I was a child I went for morning walk and do some physical exercises which made me energetic throughout the day. But now the children do not want to spent time in physical work and also avoid family gathering. According to children the family gathering is boring and they want to spend that time in games on internet and mobile. One of the games like Pubz becomes famous now a day and students waste least 4-5 hours in-game without realization. Such luxuries are harmful for future of students and make them dependent and weak.
Conclusively, the luxuries and convenience make our life easy and comfortable but it deteriorate our mental and physical development. On the basis of aforementioned reasoning’s the people has to understand changes in life style and they should choose healthy ways of development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'try'?
Suggestion: try
.... Because of use internet people do not tries to memorize even small thing and every ...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'access'
Suggestion: access
...ze even small thing and every time they accesses internet to find answers. Due to such m...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'deteriorates'?
Suggestion: deteriorates
...ke our life easy and comfortable but it deteriorate our mental and physical development. On...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, as to, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2587.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 516.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01356589147 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80256078334 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472868217054 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8730823986 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8148148148 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37037037037 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184790209312 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560752733263 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707192899048 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123691671059 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927063956234 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.