Agree or disagree
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Public transportation’s ultimate goal is to provide ease life to many people. This include reduce time consuming, less funds to pay for private cars from gas money and insurance. Many company understand this effect and try to advent new version of cars either their increasingly speed or unique designs. However, although we see many private transportation are in use now a day but, I will put my susbstantioal argues that this will be much reduced in future for several reasons.
To begin with, advent of new and fast public transportation affect tremendously on private transportation. Like train, metro, and buses, etc. this enhance people to use them instead of their own cars. Governments today spend huge funds to put these services in reaching it’s ultimate goal which is reduction in number of cars used by people. The reasons for that is to reduce the Jam of traffic on roads especially high ways. In turn, this cause reduction in number of car accident, use less human effort(policemen and policewomen)to notice the roads and less equipment like camera and traffic lights. For instance, many students who attend universitites was using their own cars to attend classes. Today certain buses go to many student living neighbiourhood to transport them with less time and money added to the students pudgets.
In addition, the reduction in use of cars will have a positive impact on ecosystem. As less car used will reduce the greenhouse gases produce from these cars and reduction in earth temprature which is now the concern of all nations about the effect of pollution on the earth. People acquaintance about this effect increased dramatically .
In sum, although some people still in use of their own car for transportation and this will not be abandon because of ease to use especially with big family transported. However, the public transportation increased much more due to to faster and less time consuming public transportation and understand of people to ecosystem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun funds is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...le. This include reduce time consuming, less funds to pay for private cars from gas ...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun company seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many companies'.
Suggestion: Many companies
...vate cars from gas money and insurance. Many company understand this effect and try to adven...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'understands'.
Suggestion: understands
...m gas money and insurance. Many company understand this effect and try to advent new versi...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun transportation seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much private transportation', 'a good deal of private transportation'.
Suggestion: much private transportation; a good deal of private transportation
...nique designs. However, although we see many private transportation are in use now a day but, I will put my...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reduced in future for several reasons. To begin with, advent of new and fast pu...
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... their own cars. Governments today spend huge funds to put these services in reac...
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...s to attend classes. Today certain buses go to many student living neighbiourhood...
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...money added to the students pudgets. In addition, the reduction in use of car...
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Suggestion: .
...about this effect increased dramatically . In sum, although...
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...his effect increased dramatically . In sum, although some people still in us...
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... transportation increased much more due to to faster and less time consuming public t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15076923077 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03499977042 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4926892488 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 5.45110844103 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18633764156 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631072958351 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628365633554 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129421181572 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209826685579 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.