A new is going to be built in your neighborhood. Do tou agree or disagree with that

Grammar and spelling errors:
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As a result our hometown has a very impo...
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As a result our hometown has a very import...
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...has a very important effect on our lives . If a movie theater were going to be bui...
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...upport it and other would oppose with it . In my view adding a movie theater would...
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Line 2, column 261, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'several reasons'.
Suggestion: several reasons
...ie theater would not be a good idea for several reason : The main reason is that addition ...
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...ot be a good idea for several reason : The main reason is that addition will cr...
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... lot of noises and traffic to the region , people who would come to see the movie ...
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...ing to have fun with children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and...
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Suggestion: many
...ith children and family , along with so much noises Of Course and needed some space ...
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... park their vehicles that they came with , for example I have a friend of mine tha...
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...Of space for park their vehicles outside ,traffic all the time and noises that chi...
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...some adult people were making late night . These people wouldnt have had those pro...
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...e were making late night . These people wouldnt have had those problem if it were not b...
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...e night . These people wouldnt have had those problem if it were not because of the Cinema. ...
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... if it were not because of the Cinema. Another reason for my opinion is, I beli...
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...r to build something in such a big space ,there are better idea which would not cr...
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...ate those problems that I just mentioned . For example adding a library would be a...
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... be a positive idea because not only it create a good way for resident to study more ,...
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...te a good way for resident to study more ,but it makes the rigen more quite .the r...
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... more ,but it makes the rigen more quite .the residents would not have had such a ...
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...wledge easily and near their home if it werent because of the library . In sum , t...
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...home if it werent because of the library . In sum , through some people may su...
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... if it werent because of the library . In sum , through some people may support...
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...rent because of the library . In sum , through some people may support the pla...
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... plan that would not be a great addition , not only it creates so much noise and t...
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...nly it creates so much noise and traffic , but the space could be use in better wa...
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...ut the space could be use in better ways .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, for example, of course, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99733922569 2.67179642975 75% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.906110057 48.9658058833 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.714285714 100.406767564 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.8571428571 20.6045352989 208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.45110844103 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0866770286186 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448056090689 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543171740883 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627186026016 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359263571971 0.0645574589148 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 11.7677419355 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.61 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.002688172 170% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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