In many countries day by day rubbish (garbage) is increasing.
Why is it happening?
What can be done?
The amount of rubbish produced by an average household has increased dramatically over the last few decades. This trend is mainly due to consumption and abundance of plastic. However, there is a range of measures that would be implemented to solve this issue.
One of the reasons for an escalation in the amount of garbage is an improvement in living standards. People believe in use and throw trend, therefore, they discard products after its minimal use. For an instance, earlier people used to cook food with ingredients they sourced from their backyard. Now they buy packed food from supermarkets which creates a myriad of plastics waste through its packaging. Unfortunately, plastic is non-biodegradable and it takes millions of years to decompose into the soil. Eventually, soil fertility decreases and it also gives rise to several health problems. Due to the cheap availability of plastics, most of the manufacturers used it for packaging of the goods. Thus, it is a significant source of increasing garbage.
However, there are a number of ways to tackle the problem of increasing junk. Firstly, the government should prohibit the use of plastics and polythene. Hefty fines should impose on the shops that offer plastic carry bags. Lastly, public awareness campaigns must promote explaining the concept of 3Rs which Reduce, Reuse, and Recycle. It is also salient to sensitize people about responsible consumptions of goods instead of disposing of it directly.
To conclude, lack of plastics consciousness and not confining non-biodegradable materials leads to a rise in the amount of garbage. Only when the government will make strict rules and society ensure to adopt them, will this situation be remedied.
- Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
- Some people tell that to reduce traffic and pollution, the government should increase the tax on petrol (gasoline). Would advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction.Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be 78
- Some people say that a person s success is as a result of the way he has been brought up by his parents Do you agree or disagree 79
- Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society Discuss both views and give your opinion 74
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, so, then, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30656934307 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04355055115 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627737226277 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.577639046 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.7777777778 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2222222222 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0305481677298 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00856173969483 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0161843120834 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0215580279668 0.151304729494 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186729237564 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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