It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
The exponential growth of technology and the transportation has shrunk the whole world as the events around the nook and corner of the world can easily be accessed from home. However, it brings up a controversial debate whether it is important to know all the events happening around the world even though it is of trivial importance or if it is a waste of time. A simple answer is that it helps in building a conversation as most of the people would like to discuss the most recent developments in politics, sports , climatic changes, natural calamities. I strongly believe that knowing the current events of the world is of utmost importance which I will explain in the following essay.
First of all, it changes the way we see and observe the things as the world is constantly changing. The growing competition urges everyone to know the current affairs up-to-date, without which the person remains ignorant of many things. That is why, some people show lot of interest in watching the news channel. With the help of growing technology, we can watch the live events from various parts of the world. This enlighten us by unveiling lot of new things and keep us updated. For example, various celebrations and sports activities which are broadcasted live not only entertain us but also provide us enough information.
Besides, the political changes happening around the world cannot be neglected as it has significant impact on the economy of other countries. For example, subsequent to US presidential elections lot of economic changes happened. Recently, there were tax reforms of export goods from China to the US and vice versa. This in turn shook the economy across the globe because of which there were lot of inflation and tax reforms. How can someone be ignorant of what is happening in Syria? Even though these events may not be useful to us in our daily events, we cannot pay a deaf ear to the worldly events. Knowing the different culture, climatic changes, laws and regulations are extremely important before planning a visit to that region. Perhaps, a recent development of social injustice, incites strong emotions and convinces us to take action. Perhaps, a new development in technology may provoke our interest and thoughts to experiment new innovation and lead us to pursue it. Perhaps, a chance to learn a nascent technology that has the potential to positively or aversely affect an industry you are keen to work of our interest, grants a foresight on how to position ourself accordingly.
Admittedly, the media projects the same news again and again, constantly watching the world events without doing the daily duties is also not a righteous thing. One should know the limitation of what is required and what not. Spending enormous hours in social media and surfing all the worldly news whole day long is not going to fetch anything.
To conclude, I would like to emphasize that knowing quintessential events across the globe is of utmost importance in the current scenario where the competition for jobs is huge. This not only broadens our knowledge but also gives good experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98080614203 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77135007413 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504798464491 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 618.680645161 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7323577632 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.8 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.84 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.48 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235867729112 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592994782151 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744906437203 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130904465032 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852200125746 0.0645574589148 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.