Write a letter to your manager about a party that you want to organize at the office. In your letter say
– Why do you want to do it?
– When and where will it take place?
– What arrangements will you have to make?
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform that I will be organizing a farewell party for a teammate. As you are aware that Daniel who was working as Project Executive has resigned and his last working day will be the 15th of January. Since I share a very cordial relationship with him moreover he worked under my guidance on many critical projects so I believe it is my responsibility to organize a party and give him a warm send off.
To elucidate, I plan to host a dinner on the 14th of January at a fine dining restaurant called " Impromptu" as I have had an overwhelming experience in the past. The restaurant is located near the outskirts of the city and its high glass windows present a panoramic view of the beautiful lake additionally the restaurant also offers a variety of cuisines especially "the buffet".
For hosting this dinner I need to make a prior reservation for the number of people attending this party apart from this I need collect monetary contribution from all the peers so that I can buy a gift for Daniel.
I look forward to your suggestion on the same.
Yours Sincerely
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform that...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uggestion on the same. Yours Sincerely Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.695 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96124551498 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.2304255491 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12128439814 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578636228688 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397928671541 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582038728779 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409757843819 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.