Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?
People’s opinion differ on the subject of taxation, as some may consider it as inequitable, I, however, contradict with this assertion.
Firstly, revenue generated by money collected through taxes are used for government operations. Meaning that State needs money in order to govern. For that purpose, Minister’s Cabinet, legislation and research departments are developed to execute state responsibilities which if not existent, will lead to chaos as an individual cannot perform duties of these departments. Furthermore, departments like Ministry of Eternal Affairs helps in developing state relations, as seeing globally, a country would not be able to survive in thriving world without absence of these.
Secondly, State offers security and benefits to public with the tax money. For instance, Defense Department run the military and general security agencies like local Police force, confirming the provision of secure environment for people. Additionally, healthcare and education system is assured by construction of hospitals and educational institutions including school and universities. To illustrate, Ethiopia has a literacy rate of 12% as the educational budget was only 2 million dollars however on the other hand, Germany has 98% literacy rate with 1.2 Billion dollars spent on education yearly. These all above mentioned department facilitates public and help them with achieve quality life.
Admittedly, states like Alaska, which is a part of USA, is tax free but this cannot be true for every country as it is rich in fossil fuels making it a self-sustained piece of land. Although governments can take actions to increase resources like tourism to reduce taxation.
In conclusion, I believe that taxes are necessary for the governance and for the purpose of life standard increment.
- Housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences Some people think only government action can solve this problem To what extent do you agree or disagree 88
- Some people think that rest and sleep are the best methods to relax while others think that it can be done by involving in some activities like sports. Do you agree or disagree and give your view? 89
- The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life.Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work i 89
- Countries become more developed due to mix of different people and their culture Do you agree or disagree 97
- In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their product Do you think it s a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...king it a self-sustained piece of land. Although governments can take actions to increas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12131779756 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676363636364 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1173390932 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973347699702 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403140761505 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374358818692 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547720230601 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144040453367 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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